Thread: Kya se kya Bun gaya hoon - Written by 'handsom'
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Old 12-09-2007, 08:17 AM
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Default Re: Kya se kya Bun gaya hoon - Written by 'handsom'
the poem is good, but you might want to try putting the lines in verses and somehow still keep the touch u have in this poem, but its a nice poem.....whose it for...lol...